Chapter 184. His Secret Place

“Your presentation just now confirmed the thought that I had when I was reading your proposal. This storyboard seems well put together and I know without a doubt that it was hard work for you both; however, there’s something very lacking about it,” Ace said before his eyes rested on both of us.

There’s something very lacking…?

“Can you please explain?” Jeremy quickly requested clarification.

“Of course. I feel like the storyboard is very dry although all the components that we agreed upon are in there. This is just my guess but if we hand in the storyboard as is to the production team, we will end up getting a commercial that doesn’t have any emotional appeal to the audience. In other words, it won’t be emotionally engaging and that is the key to success for a commercial with the purpose of motivating social changes,” Ace started to explain sternly.

“But I’m sure that we’ve incorporated all the scenes that should be relatable to the audiences…” I mumbled.